2014년 10월 26일 일요일

First Draft

First Draft :


Until now people have lived with exercise. Exercise has acted as essential part to living for human. Also, exercise has influenced on human for a long time. People know that doing exercise help to enhance the physical ability of human. However, I think that exercise also affects on human mind. Though, there are some opponents who say that doing exercise only helps enhance the physical ability not the mental ability, I strongly argue that exercise has positive influences on human mind. 

Actually, a lot of people know that exercise has a lot of effects on human body. People can use the energy by doing exercise. Also,  Exercising prevents many diseases such as arthritis, and aging process. Therefore,  Many people learn and do the exercise. However, There are also a lot of studies that doing exercise can enhance the memorial ability. Especially, It can be the method that prevents the Alzheimer. It is the reason why the exercise makes gene expression which enhances neurogenesis, blood flow, and neuronal resistance to injury, specifically in the hippocampus.
The hippocampus is crucial for learning and memory storage. Animal research already has shown that the exercise affects positively on the neural systems associated with memory.

Not only the studies about memorial ability, there are still a number of studies that prove positive effects of exercise on human brain. According to an article, Doing exercise positively impacts neural systems associated with learning. Therefore It leads to faster learning. By the experiments about monkeys, Judy Cameron knows that Regardless of the age of the monkeys, Cameron's group discovered that the monkeys on the running regimen learned new things twice as fast as the sedentary animals. 

Also there is one more effect : Self control. A review of 24 different studies on the effects of exercise on self-control, found that a short bout provides an immediate boost to self-control. Although regular exercise did not show an effect on self-control, a period of moderate exercise did allow people to take better control of themselves.


I've already said that doing exercise has strong impacts on human. It helps enhance the physical and mental ability. It will be much  helpful  if you know about the brain constitution, especially  hippocampus.

And There are a lot of effects of exercise. For example, Many scientists and doctors studied the impacts of exercise on human mind. They found twenty wonderful effects.
If people exercise constantly, they can reduce anxiety and stress, and escape a bad mood such as depression, and control themselves more easily, and stimulate brain cell growth. and also ensure the deep sleep. Surprisingly, doing exercise can prevent lots of diseases such as Alzheimer and migraine. These result and studies make we feel effects of exercise in our bones. And we can know the fact that doing exercise leads us to be happier.

Although there are a lot of studies that prove my arguments, there are some opponents who argue that doing exercise only effects on human body not the brain.
They are saying that how physical activity can affects the inner organization called brain. And also they use the saying that the men who exercise a lot are cool but fool.
However, I insist that the exercise can effects on human brain. I've already said that doing exercise trigger the gene expression that is associated with hippocampus which enhance the memory power. Also the saying that the men who exercise a lot are cool but foo is just a a prejudice and generalization. And I mean basic moderate exercise not the professional sports.


Also I want to insist that always there are some exception.

People have exercised for a long time. And Unconsciously they have been influenced by doing exercise.
 Until now,most people exercise a lot.  And I am one of the people who enjoy doing exercise such as running, playing basket ball, and so on. Also I am influenced by exercise. So I really want to spread the effects of exercise and benefits of exercise. The exercise has a lot of effects on human body and brain. Especially brain, It helps to enhance the memorial ability, learning ability. Also doing exercise help people to escape the bad moods. Even, doing exercise can prevent a lot of diseases such as Alzheimer. Nowadays, It become the method to treat some diseases.
However, some says that the exercise effects on only body. It is true that doing exercise has main impacts on body, but there are also effects on brain,too. However, Doing exercise has huge impacts on human brain. It can make people happier.

2014년 10월 25일 토요일

The Conclusion

The Conclusion :

My conclusion :

People have exercised for a long time. And Unconsciously they have been influenced by doing exercise.
 Until now,most people exercise a lot.  And I am one of the people who enjoy doing exercise such as running, playing basket ball, and so on. Also I am influenced by exercise. So I really want to spread the effects of exercise and benefits of exercise. The exercise has a lot of effects on human body and brain. Especially brain, It helps to enhance the memorial ability, learning ability. Also doing exercise help people to escape the bad moods. Even, doing exercise can prevent a lot of diseases such as Alzheimer. Nowadays, It become the method to treat some diseases.
However, some says that the exercise effects on only body. It is true that doing exercise has main impacts on body, but there are also effects on brain,too. However, Doing exercise has huge impacts on human brain. It can make people happier.

2014년 10월 24일 금요일

Refutation and Cncession

Refutation and Concession :


what is my thesis?

Exercise has positive effects on human mind.

What is the opposite position?

Doing exercise only effects on human body not the brain.


What arguments can I anticipate?

 ex) there is saying that the men who exercise a lot are cool but fool.


How I counter those arguments?

The saying is just a prejudice and generalization. And I mean moderate exercise. Not the professional athletes.
My refutation and Concession

Although there are a lot of studies that prove my arguments, there are some opponents who argue that doing exercise only effects on human body not the brain.
They are saying that how physical activity can affects the inner organization called brain. And also they use the saying that the men who exercise a lot are cool but fool.
However, I insist that the exercise can effects on human brain. I've already said that doing exercise trigger the gene expression that is associated with hippocampus which enhance the memory power. Also the saying that the men who exercise a lot are cool but foo is just a a prejudice and generalization. And I mean basic moderate exercise not the professional sports.
Also I want to insist that always there are some exception.

2014년 10월 23일 목요일

The Confirmation

The Confirmation :



What is my thesis?

Exercise has positive effects on human mind.


What types of source am I using to defend my thesis?

I am using articles, experiments and studies of experts.

Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?

My arguments are mostly based on evidence such as experiments, studies and articles.

My confirmation

I've already said that doing exercise has strong impacts on human. It helps enhance the physical and mental ability. It will be much  helpful  if you know about the brain constitution, especially  hippocampus.

And There are a lot of effects of exercise. For example, Many scientists and doctors studied the impacts of exercise on human mind. They found twenty wonderful effects.
If people exercise constantly, they can reduce anxiety and stress, and escape a bad mood such as depression, and control themselves more easily, and stimulate brain cell growth. and also ensure the deep sleep. Surprisingly, doing exercise can prevent lots of diseases such as Alzheimer and migraine. These result and studies make we feel effects of exercise in our bones. And we can know the fact that doing exercise leads us to be happier.

2014년 10월 22일 수요일

The Narration

The Narration :



My classical argument thesis is : The Exercise has a lot of impact on human mind.

1. What do people already know about the topic?

People already know that exercise has a lot of effects on human


2. What research has already been done about my topic?. 



3. What are the implications of my argument?

Exercise obviously has effects not only on the body part but also the brain part.  People can use exercising as a clinic for many mental diseases.


My Narration :

Actually, a lot of people know that exercise has a lot of effects on human body. People can use the energy by doing exercise. Also,  Exercising prevents many diseases such as arthritis, and aging process. Therefore,  Many people learn and do the exercise. However, There are also a lot of studies that doing exercise can enhance the memorial ability. Especially, It can be the method that prevents the Alzheimer. It is the reason why the exercise makes gene expression which enhances neurogenesis, blood flow, and neuronal resistance to injury, specifically in the hippocampus.
The hippocampus is crucial for learning and memory storage. Animal research already has shown that the exercise affects positively on the neural systems associated with memory.

Not only the studies about memorial ability, there are still a number of studies that prove positive effects of exercise on human brain. According to an article, Doing exercise positively impacts neural systems associated with learning. Therefore It leads to faster learning. By the experiments about monkeys, Judy Cameron knows that Regardless of the age of the monkeys, Cameron's group discovered that the monkeys on the running regimen learned new things twice as fast as the sedentary animals. 

Also there is one more effect : Self control. A review of 24 different studies on the effects of exercise on self-control, found that a short bout provides an immediate boost to self-control. Although regular exercise did not show an effect on self-control, a period of moderate exercise did allow people to take better control of themselves.

2014년 10월 21일 화요일

The Introduction

The Introduction :


Until now people have lived with exercise. Exercise has acted as essential part to living for human. Also, exercise has influenced on human for a long time. People know that doing exercise help to enhance the physical ability of human. However, I think that exercise also affects on human mind. Though, there are some opponents who say that doing exercise only helps enhance the physical ability not the mental ability, I strongly argue that exercise has positive influences on human mind. 

2014년 10월 19일 일요일

Classical argument outline

Classical argument outline :


1. The introduction

I'll start the introduction by explaining the relationship between human and exercise . Then I will explain the impacts of exercise on human. Also I will end my intro with my thesis : Doing exercise has positive effects on human mind.


2. The Narration

I will give the information about how exercise affects on  human brain? And I'll explain the basic structure of brain. this phenomenon is abstract so It is hard to reader to understand my argument without basic information of brain. Also I'll give the exact principle or theory about impacts of exercise.


3. The Confirmation

I'll examine the strong points of doing exercise. Then I will explain how exercise affects on human brain. Then I'll give the principles or examples of the effects of exercise.


4. The refutation and concession :

Some will say that the exercise only enhance the physical ability not the mental ability.
It is the fact that the main effects of exercise is physical things,but It also helps  enhance the ability of brain. 

5. The summation : 

I want to tell the readers what will happen on the brain when we exercise. Also,I want to tell them that doing exercise can help to cure some mental diseases.  And I will end with my thesis.

2014년 10월 18일 토요일

Articulation

Articulation :

1. My argument :

I want to argue that the exercise has  positive effects on human. Many scientists said that doing exercise  has a lot of impacts on human. I want to show the impacts especially on human brain.

2. How I found my argument :

While finding some research questions, I learned about the physical effects of exercise on human body in class. But at that time, I did not know about the psychological impacts. Thus, I want to know about the impacts of exercise on the mental things : 'mind' 'brain' . Then I asked teacher " Is this qualified for my topic?"
and he said "Yes, sure. " So I choose it.


3. New research questions

a) There are some opponents who says exercise only effects on human body, then         why they think like that?
b) Is there any clinical demonstrations on humans? (I found the trials that is only on         animals).
c) How can I prove the effectiveness of exercise? (Using statistics or Examples)

4. Connections to the Harvard Sampler :
Exercise has a lot of effects not only on the body part but also on the brain part. Plus it can be the treatment of mental diseases. And the human brain also means human mind. Therefore, it can be connected to "Human mind"